Most recently, I’ve ventured onto the internets as a seamstress and a cyclist. My new day job has me typing away for 8 hours a day, and while I make the time to write fiction I rarely have any desire to write about writing fiction. This blog, which was already quite neglected, has been all but abandoned.

The transition into working full time as a copywriter from working part time as a waitress has been rough on my creativity. Gone are the mellow weekday mornings where I had hours set aside to for writing and editing. Gone is the flexible schedule. In its place is a stable job with benefits, and a whole hell of a lot less wrist pain. Plus I don’t have to deal with cheap college students on a Saturday night binge.

All that to say: I’m settling into my job and learning how to make time to write fiction with my new schedule. I probably won’t be posting much on this blog except for writing announcements, so if you want to know what I’m up to in life, check out Bicitoro, my cycling/sewing blog.

And speaking of announcements, look for FISH, Dagan Books latest anthology, coming out in February. Yours truly has a story in it.

Update 10:30 AM, Wednesday December 29th

The little tyke weighs in at 4 pounds, 3oz, and looks like one of those frogs that lives in a cave and has never seen sunlight. Which makes sense, I suppose. She’s being incubated and tested to see if she needs to stay here for a week or so, but overall she’s healthy, if ridiculously small and wrinkly. I’m an aunt!

Yes.

I’m so, so glad to be home.

I haven’t had much time lately to write, what with the family and the cross-state driving and the hours and hours in front of my sewing machine, but I’m back home now and ready to tackle the writing projects I’ve been ignoring over the last few weeks. Once I sort through the bags and boxes of loot that Rob and I scored this Christmas.

Like a tortilla press! Yes, mom, I know that wasn’t actually a Christmas present, but it’s certainly one of the things I’m most excited about. Our kitchen is now crazy outfitted with all the gadgets we could ever need, as is my sewing room. I now have cozy sock-slippers to wear whilst I cook delicious meals and sew adorable clothes, yummy hot-drink mixes to sip with the whiskey we got in Idaho ($10 cheaper there, which is maybe why the roads aren’t as good), a new book of sewing patterns I’m dying to try out, a beautiful table runner from my oh-so-talented grandmother, and some gorgeous metalwork from my oh-so-talented father. And a massive bag of homemade caramel corn that I’m going to try very hard not to eat in its entirety today. I really should hide that in the closet.

It’s beckoning me from the table. Temptress.

Just a heads up, I probably will be blogging sparsely over the next week or so, since my sister is about to pop out the latest addition to our family at any minute. I am working on another writing exercise, however, this one about dialogue and accent, inspired by John le Carré’s The Secret Pilgrim.

Happy Boxing Day, and a Happy New Year!

I’m not going to pretend that there’s anything different about my latest resolution to blog more; actions speak louder than words, as they say. We shall see.

What is different is that I’ve been taking it upon myself to do semi-regular writing exercises inspired by the books I’m reading. Since I’m doing these already, it seems like a good idea to Blog them in the event that some other writer might stumble upon them and find them helpful in their own personal craft-honing efforts.

This week’s exercise: Cultivating Richness of Language, a la N. Scott Momaday.

And I’m totally splitting this into two posts, just to make myself feel like I’m making progress. Ha.

What I had hoped to be a quick and easy revision is turning into a pretty thorough re-writing of the entire novel, thanks to Rob’s unrelenting criticism of my plot flaws. Should be good.

Anyway, just a note to let you know I haven’t vanished into the North Idaho wilderness. I’ll be back.

I have a new phone number, and even though I’ve had it for a few months now I still have to pause and think hard before typing it, or giving it out. That’s nothing new, either, as this is at least my seventh new phone number since I’ve moved away from the 509 area code.

Yesterday I closed my Bank of America account, since I’ve been exclusively using the Joint Married People’s Account. I’ve had that 8-digit account number memorized for 10 years, and as I recited it for the bank teller yesterday I realized that it was the last time I’d ever say that sequence of numbers. Now when I want to make a deposit I’m left scrambling for that scrap of paper somewhere in my wallet, I know you’re there somewhere that has my new account number.

I finally opened an account with the Kootenai-Shoshone Library system, and now no longer do I type in my 13-digit Seattle Public Library card number when I want to place a book on hold. It’s still there, rattling around until we move back, but now I have a new number to type in, and if I’m working upstairs then my library card is inevitably downstairs and vice versa.

It’s as if all the anchors have been pulled at once–I feel a little adrift….

I’m beginning to believe that each geographical region has an attachment to certain songs that have been lost to other regions. That each region has, as it were, their own unique mixed tape of once-popular, long-forgotten-everywhere-else musical numbers. Every radio station, department store and bar has a copy.

In Peru, that mixed tape included Madonna’s “Isla Bonita,” Men at Work’s “Land Down Under,” and Survivor’s “Eye of the Tiger.” Here in Northern Idaho that mixed tape includes Fleetwood Mac’s “Dreams,” that new Pearl Jam song, and copious amounts of Country Music.

By the way, you’ve all seen this video, right? I had to include it, as it’s just so bizarre. Such as in the scene when they’re doing a synchronized digging-routine dance, then they all turn and hop away like kangaroos with no rhythm. What does it all mean?

But I’ve let myself get distracted. I was outlining points of my sound argument for the swift acquisition of an ipod.

Wherein I begin to talk about Country Music

I love the idea of Country Music. I dig the twang, I like the guitar licks, the fiddle, the boot-tappin’ tempo. I like the potential themes, having come from a a Country Background myself (though 8 years in Seattle, a cumulative 1.5 years outside the US, and an English Lit degree pretty much exclude me from “Being Country,” and that’s cool with me).

Music is a powerful medium for storytelling, but most Modern Country Music seems to run screaming from that, instead using bland, generic lyrics to describe bland, universal situations. Perhaps this is meant to make the song applicable to more people, but instead it just makes you wonder why you should care.

Basic Country Formulas:

• Love: Things were bad, but looking into your eyes makes them good.
• Breakup A: I’m out on the town in my sexy heels/studly cowboy hat, and you’ll soon be quite jealous.
• Breakup B: You left me and I’m pretty upset about that.
• Breakup C: Damn, I really screwed that one up.
• I’m Country: You can tell this because I drink cheap beer around a bonfire in the “backwoods”, drive a tractor, wear overalls, didn’t go to college but I’m good with a wrench, am hassled by the Man, etc. (Sung in the key of “defiant”).
• Pickup songs: These are both about one’s love for actual pickup trucks (or other Country Vehicles such as tractors), and about hitting on people in bars. Sometimes they’re combined, such as in “She thinks my tractor’s sexy,” which I always crank up when it comes on the radio.

Is there anything wrong with these formulas? Absolutely not. Every story is based around a generic formula–it’s the specific details of the situation that makes a story/song interesting. What I’ve noticed in my constant flipping through Northern Idaho Radio, though, is that most of these songs are carefully generic, as though to best encompass the Human Experience.

For example, Carrie Underwood’s new song “Temporary Home.” She paints a fuzzy picture of three generic situations that should elicit the listener’s pity/empathy: A kid in a foster home, a young mom in a halfway house, an old man on his deathbed. But they’re not characters. It’s not a story. They’re simply bland symbols intended to provoke an emotional response. It’s boring. (Also, the binge-drinking, tire-slashing Carrie Underwood is a whole hell of a lot more fun.)

What changed over the decades from the great storytelling of Early Country? Is this a deliberate attempt to write more universally applicable songs, Country Anthems that folks all the way from Washington State to Tennessee can identify with? And if you write songs meant to be universal, how will they possibly be interesting?

Here I gush for a while about how much I love the Drive-by Truckers

Haven’t you heard the Drive-by Truckers? Oh, really, darling, you must search them out.

Lyrically, Modern Country is pretty uninteresting. The closest thing I’ve heard to a double meaning in a Country Song lately was during an ode to gettin’ it on: “ain’t nothin’ on but the radio.” The line’s not clever, but at least it’s an attempt at creativity with language.

Music is like poetry, in that it requires a certain sparseness of language, the best choice of the best word to tell a story. I’m prone to long, over-evolved explanations (which means that I suck at both jokes and concise blogging), so I don’t write poetry. Patterson Hood and Mike Cooley, however, manage to write songs that manage to distill a compelling life story into 20 lines, more or less.

Their songs are intensely character-driven, something which makes the emotions and situations more compelling than the carefully bland Country Songs on the radio. Sometimes the songs are sung from the character’s POV, but often they’re sung from the POV of a friend or relative looking in, the words painting an intimate picture of a life. I don’t care about Carrie Underwood’s featureless foster boy, but in “Little Bonnie” (A Blessing and a Curse) I feel deeply for Bonnie’s (and the narrator’s) father. In “The Sands of Iwo Jima” (The Dirty South), the narrator sketches out an image of his great uncle:

When I was just a kid I spent every weekend
On the farm he grew up on so I guess so did I
And we’d stay up watching movies on the black and white TV
We watched “The Sands of Iwo Jima” starring John Wayne

Every year in June George A. goes to a reunion
Of the men that he served with and their wives and kids and grandkids
My Great Uncle used to take me and I’d watch them recollect
about some things I couldn’t comprehend

And I thought about that movie, asked if it was that way
He just shook his head and smiled at me in such a loving way
As he thought about some friends he will never see again
He said “I never saw John Wayne on the sands of Iwo Jima”

If I ever teach a creative writing class, I will teach The Deeper In as a superb example of economy of language. Talk about lines with double meanings, the song is full of phrases that are both innocent and deeply sexual, which a song about illegal, societally-shunned love should be.

Love? Try “Marry Me” (Decoration Day) where the protagonist declares to his sweetheart that even though their hometown isn’t much of a place to live, “I’d rather be your fool nowhere / than go somewhere and be no one’s.”

Breakup (C)? Try “Sounds Better in the Song” (Decoration Day): “And ‘Lord knows, I can’t change’ sounds better in the song / than it does with hell to pay.”

Politics? From “Puttin People on the Moon” (Dirty South): “Mary Alice quit askin’ why I do the things I do / I ain’t sayin’ that she likes it, but what else I’m gonna do? / If I could solve the world’s problems I’d probably start with hers and mine / But they can put a man on the moon / And I’m stuck in Muscle Shoals just barely scraping by”

You’re not still reading this, are you? Put down this blog and go buy a Drive-by Truckers album right now!

I just bought the first new book I’ve owned in probably a year: Changeless by Gail Carriger. I’ve seen it around on the internets, and so I decided to pick it up. Victorian propriety meets werewolves? From the back cover:

But Alexia is armed with her trusty parasol, the latest fashions, and an arsenal of biting civility. Even when her investigations take her to Scotland, the backwater of ugly waistcoats, she is prepared: upending werewolf pack dynamics as only the soulless can.

I laughed out loud in the book store (Hastings–it’s decently big! With a good selection! And a little coffee shop! All is not lost in Northern Idaho.). I’m looking forward to sharing it with you all. Especially you, mom.

My heart has been lifted today in this Northern Idaho Wilderness. Not only did I find Hastings, I also got a chance to wander through Pilgrims Natural Foods, which is like a reasonably-priced PCC (Whole Foods for those of you who don’t live in Seattle. Mom, I know you got the reference.). My cloth grocery bags are now stuffed with organic limes, tofu, bulghar wheat, and a dozen other food items that have never before been inside the Upstairs Apartment’s kitchen.

I’m currently sipping a delicious coffee at Calypso Coffee and Roasting Company, which is a quirky big coffee shop with all the things we quirky coffee people love: mixed media art on the walls, muted earthen color schemes, furniture than looks like it was stolen from victorian mansions and mod lofts, and draped cloth with vaguely Indian prints. I am in love.

Plus, I’m high from two back-to-back fantastic job interviews. With any sort of good fortune I should be spilling cocktails and/or home-style gravy on diners by next week.

Just to put a damper on all the good news, it’s snowing. In April. Really, Northern Idaho? Work with me now.

Even less is happening in Hayden Lake on a sleepy Sunday morning–gray skies have dampened spirits after the last few days of sunshine. But I’m glad of that. I’m not in the mood to become motivated.

I’m taking the morning off to read blogs and go in for the kill on my first pot of coffee, with the expectation that I’ll write that piece for Unpaved when I’m done relaxing. I’ve decided that today will be a day to add to the to-do list, not subtract from it. A brainstorming for the week to come, if you will….